Monday, November 26, 2007

Warm snow

Everybody knows, that when it snows
It must be cold.
And you hope the weather holds
Until you build a man, a snow man, sam
Put down that dirt, yes, the man will wear a shirt
Come on, lets roll up the snow
One ball for the head and ten for the toes
One for the middle the other for legs
His eyes will be rocks shaped like eggs
Hey, sam, go get a carrot
Oh well, never mind it is getting hot
Look, the man is leaving!
Ha ha! he is so deceiving
Sam? sam where are you?
Hey get back here, where is your other shoe?
Lets go in now the sun is gone
We will feed the fish in the shark pond
Then go make hot lemonade
And sip it in the cool shade

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

the first part was good but the latter part was kind of.... to far for the snowman at the start.

Anonymous said...

my "poems" don't make any sense at first. after you read them about 20 times, it starts clicking. I know what I mean, but nobody else does at first.

Anonymous said...

I know what thats like. sometime I will bring one with me and show you and I won't if all I get is hordes of laughter.

Anonymous said...

my mom just turn your poem into rap.

Anonymous said...

how?!? what does it sound like?!? thats terrible, i hate rap!

Anonymous said...

i wont laugh out loud, but as soon as you leave i may. :D

Anonymous said...

well my mom said that the poems had no real timing so my mom made them and it happened to be rap sounding.